WOW.
My total initial though of this map was just, wow!!
This looks like the coolest map to ever play on. Such an amazing atmoshere that you've created its mindblowing. Yellow and black are perfect colors for each other, and you use every drop of them in this it looks! this map eevn comes with a super sechseh matching skybox!

This map shows that mapping is truly an art. using this as an example it would be hard to give a comeback for anything.
Love the style, setting, flow, and rhythm of the map man. awesome awesome jo. added to one of my favorites =).

He he he this looks great! i like the 3d skybox, and your good use of geometry. this map is somewhat unique as in useing all colors instead of just one with different shades. it seems like it would play like any other GG map, so you wont be let down. I like the custom colors on the little boxes. thats great man. this is definally worth downloading and playing.

Improvements might be add another level. looks like you go from storie one to storie three. maybe put doorways thorugh the triangles for more dynamic expeirences.

this is a nice fresh good start. very solid foundation. i owuld definally consider adding more to this.

o one more ting before i forget. try some texture lighting on the edges of the triangels and the surrounding walls. that would look like sucha cool effect. like having a rainbow alll around, =P.

Great sutff man, i hope some of my advice helps out =)

Pros: Instant Classic! (whatever that means). Texture lighting always looks cool, and this map puts it to some damn good use! And pretty Unique too. I Like how everything is pink. Its obviously heartcore! there is no doubt you know what map your playing when this comes on. The stairs are a cool touch, and the rotating boxs are pretty cool too! The 3D Skybox really makes this map noticeable. Its like a little city built on mars or something. Texture lighting is nothing new, but the pink is definally something great. The curved windows are excellasnt, you have made this a super well balanced map with straight lines and lots of curves.
Cons: I feel like if i play this map for more than 10 minutes, then look away everything will be green O.O (stare at a pink paper, look away and everything is green =O) The design of this is just like any other GG map, symetrical. I hate that, it cant get much more fair then that, but i love when maps are different on either side. it makes it a bit harder to predict movments and provides a bit more of a challenge. The easiest way to make a gg map is a symmetrical map.
Improvements: its gg, Symetrical is how its suppose to be. maybe try something like this with two different sides. its like you make it work, or it just doest =P risky, but can be worth it.
Notes: Lovely map! i bet a nice full server with this just must be insane and probably loads of fun. (but dont expect your eyes to readjust to a normal map so fast =P) hard work pays off man. excellant looking map. keep this with you. it could take you far =).

Pros: When tons of work go into a map, its noticable. If all you play is dev textured maps, then all of a sudden this one pops up, your mind would jsut blow out of your skull! The amout of little details, and big details really goes beyond what you should normally expect from an average map! The choices of textures are just perfect, i am from american and this to me looks like a german town for sure. (dont know wehre bayeux is) This has the essentails for a small town, such as the town square, castle doors, and the many houses and shops along the streets. Windows on every house. each house is unique in its own way too, which is very hard to accomplish when you design maps. This design is basically flawless.
Cons: From a war point of view, it looks like nobody has invaded this city yet, and civilians should still be living here. When lookig around, i sometimes feel this map is going to stab me, some of the edges are very sharp, and parts of it are made of squares. If this were a modern map it would make sense. The arcs give you the relief of knowing curves still exist =P.
Improvements: Curve little things you owuldnt suspect. starcase edges that are curved are definally a "wower". Things like this take time, and that might be somehting you may not have. not all of us do.
Last thing is a little more lighting. picture two looks epic but the colors really clash XP.

Notes: Beautiful map man. tthis is a work of art you should really treasure, it will DEFINALLY get you a job at any company wanting to hire for pretty much any FPS. (infinity ward would love you for like CoD7 WW2 stuff).

Pros: When i think of the word "Mapping" i get the idea of creating your own world putting all your mind into it. bringing other players to your world. you control every aspect, you decided what it looks like.

This is a beaitiful work of art. i feel imerssed in this world you made. where i am this small guy in this giant castle lookin for baddies. i would rather aspire to look around and savior the pure beauty this map delivers. The design of thsi map is absolute genious! it combines all aspects of intense gaming choke points and large ares equally spread. The castle is falling apart, gives you the feeling that it is quite the old place! This excels in Ambience, Design, and out does looks. Sir your maps have always impressed me, and they never stop. 10/10 this is absoulty genious.